Water disputes between states in federal India

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asked Jan 8, 2017 in Essay by AnonymousStudent (85 points)
edited Jan 8, 2017 by AnonymousStudent

Hi,

Essay - Water disputes between states in federal India

plz give your valuable feedbacks...! And plz also suggest on essay structure like paragraphs, sentence structures etc.

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commented Jan 8, 2017 by arunshourie1989 (395 points)
Well balanced.
However, I knows its not that easy but need to improve hand writing and make efforts to  not just state facts but arrange them in a better manner.

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answered Jan 12, 2017 by challenger (13,790 points)
Dear AnonymousStudent ,

Please understand the limitation of a free platform.But even in paid platform also even feedback is given after several days for essay.(personal experience minimum they take 1 week).

But we don't want to take excuse of free platform.If you rightly observe the Essay Evaluation is in coming soon section.Still we are not discouraging  the aspirants!!

Feedback on Essay

1.Introduction should open up the essay topic directly.

2.content is good.

3.Dont use short forms in essay...WDP

4.Essay should touch the matter in depth.Please avoid redundant points.

     personally i suggest you to read the editorial daily and observe the flow of the writing.

Practice makes man perfect .write more and more. your flow is good try to maintain it.

Keep writing :)
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